The first entry on Dmitri Shostakovich’s Wikipedia page is from
September 26, 2006. The tone is very informal and uses the word “cheeky”
several times, which makes me think that this article was written by someone
without a scholarly background. The author briefly summarizes Shostakovich’s
life, lists his fifteen symphonies, and provides a brief synopsis and analysis
of each. Some of these synopses include sentence fragments, which does not lend
credibility to the article. A link to a list of all of Shostakovich’s
compositions does not appear until much later.
The first edit happens a month later on October 29, 2001. The
editor changed the formatting and adds a few small details, such as
Shostakovich’s birthday and where he lived. After this, edits are few and far
between until, a year later, someone adds more content. The added content,
however, contains more analysis of his music rather than an unbiased account of
his life.
Minor revisions on formatting and spelling continues until July
2003 when the first graphic is added. This image breaks one of the ten rules
about web design: it is bloated. When I accessed this page, the image was huge
and the text wrapped around it oddly.
Over the next fourteen years, people added, deleted, and edited the
content, but Henry Flower’s extensive work in 2004 set the stage for the main
organization and content of the website.
In 2015, a minor controversy arose over whether or not the word “Communist”
should be included in the phrase “Joining the Party.” Eventually, one person
gave up and “Communist” was left out.
The latest addition to the page was September 14, 2018, and it
contained only minor revisions.
On Joseph Stalin’s Wikipedia page, the first article was created
in October 2001. It was more advanced than Shostakovich’s page in that it
started with sections. There was even a “to be added” section for future
contributors. Stalin’s page was written in more formal and academic language
than Shostakovich’s, but it was still very vague. From the beginning, however,
the editors of Stalin’s page seemed more inclined toward accuracy and
objectivity than those who edited Shostakovich’s Wikipedia page.
Until January 2002, the changes on Stalin’s page were minute
facts, like childhood nicknames, or formatting changes, like the addition of
more white space. In 2002, someone added a significant chunk to the information
connecting Stalin and World War II. Later in January, someone noticed that a
claim on the page was not from a neutral perspective and changed. By looking
through the years, keeping a neutral tone of voice is important to the editors
of Stalin’s Wikipedia page, though the editors certainly do not keep a neutral
tone in their comments. They use personal attacks such as, “Leave that sentence
alone,” and “[We’ve] replaced one hack with another…”
For a while in 2004, the page dealt with spammers who deleted the
entire page. Right away, members of the Wiki-Police reverted Stalin’s
webpage to its previous state.
The most recent changes are from today, the 20th of
September, 2018. The last person changed passive voice to active voice and
clunky diction to more easily understandable words. Now, there are many sub-headings
with hyperlinks to easily navigate the page. Over the last seventeen years,
there has been much expansion on the original, skimpy biography.
The page for Music in the
Soviet Union began in October 2004. There was never much content on it, and it remained
the same, minus some spelling errors, and focused on national music and folk
music until 2008 when someone radically altered the page. They deleted all of
the previous content and updated it to be about Russian classical, jazz, and
movie music during Soviet reign. Still, the page did not have a lot of
information on it until May 2013, when someone updated many of the sections to
make them more complete. Now, there is much more information on the page than
ever before, but it is not as professionally kept and updated as Stalin’s page.
This past April, someone vandalized the site. It was quickly
removed, but the vandal was persistent and re-added his or her comment to the
page two more times before giving up.
The last time this page was updated was in August 2018.
In the three articles that I looked at, editors were very active
in 2004. It was during this time that most of the changes, especially in the
first two articles, were made. It was in 2004, too, when most of the scholarly,
“heavy lifting” research and work was put into the sites. Most of the major
content changes for Shostakovich and Stalin’s pages were made in 2004 and the
articles have only been tweaked since then. I looked at several of the major
contributors to these articles, and, from their profiles, they seemed like
scholarly people who have a passion for research and sharing their interests with
the world. It is important to remember, however, that Wikipedia is accessible
to be edited by anyone from anywhere; therefore, it should still be used with
caution when writing academic articles.
Word Count: 937 words.
Word Count: 937 words.








Abbey,
ReplyDeleteFine job! Interesting that this article has not been updated since 2010. What might that tell you about the subject? Curious.
Best,
JL